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Wanted to try my hand at writing. You're probably warned a bit late, but this story has gassy and weight gain stuff in it. Also awful characters.
the fun part was writing all the tooty onomonopoea
also i cant draw. did this instead.
Eku is mine
Agatha is 's
why are my comments for this thing at the bottom it really doesn't make any sense. also putting stories on here is kind of confusing sorry
maybe it's too long. i dont know. there are shorter stories. let me know so i can do this sort of thing better.
the fun part was writing all the tooty onomonopoea
also i cant draw. did this instead.
Eku is mine
Agatha is 's
why are my comments for this thing at the bottom it really doesn't make any sense. also putting stories on here is kind of confusing sorry
maybe it's too long. i dont know. there are shorter stories. let me know so i can do this sort of thing better.
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Still not sure what the impact slider thing is for, but i am going to assume that it creates cookies. Storywise it is a good piece, the characters are given enough to to flesh out without exposition being forced. Description wise all the descriptions of the characters gives enough feel to show a bit of who they are and what they look like without being forceful. Scenery description was adequate, maybe a bit more to help paint more of a picture, but that's just a personal taste. Also expansions segments gave a good amount of tension, while not losing track of the characters and their feelings. all in all a fun read